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This stench

I hate the way you have an excuse for everything
The stench of your lies is emanating
From every fucking place you’ve been
It’s leaking from every memory you’ve left in my head
And every taste you’ve left on my lips.

I want you to leave.

This stench is making me gag,

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  • PrInCeSsOfRoCk gold member
    January 30, 2008
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    very powerful, can feel the hate and kind of disgust in it. well done!