Desire ignited and lifted my eyes
Upon your form my gaze then rested
My willpower shaken and sorely tested
Denial of my want such thinning lies
For you whispered in rhythmic tones
Longing words and sensual phrases
Yearning hearts and heat filled gazes
Sighs of wonderment and soft moans
My body softening to this craving
For my need became my master
Racing beats and breathing faster
Self control passed, no longer waiving
Lost in this dance of such yearning
We no longer cared for our restraint
Our bodies aching to acquaint
Skin touching skin, souls now burning
Tempos begin to rise and increase
Deep needs grasping and reaching
Our gazes lusting and beseeching
To give each other sweet release
Fulfilment dreamed of now in sight
Giving to each the sweet permission
To lose ourselves… no inhibition
Reaching crescendo in the night
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Beautiful sensual poem..conjured my anniversary with hubby few days ago....
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Nice!
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crecendo
Beautiful, hot,flows with increasing intensity.
Some one is very blessed to have you near.
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How beautifully soft and sensual, dear sis...this is what passion and love are all about, makes me wish for it again...lol
This is a truly wonderful write, so glad I read it, even if it makes me want for more.
Love
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Wow,such wonderous passion,beautifully written.
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You do realize if you were to recite this in California or Florida, the wildfires that you would cause? Of course I would then have to turn you in to the constable...well perhaps after two weeks in Mexico?
Great write, liquid, fiery passion
len
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yes
any man might desire to be this Robert,what a fantastic write, glad I logged back on. Your poem itself becomes a crescendo, not easy to capture such a personal passion and spread it out like diamonds on black velvet for us to delight in. thanx....
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my first wow, for today
gosh you laced this with enough passion to have any guy breathlessly-stunned
beautiful, Robert is one lucky guy lol
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So Beautiful
Wow, this was breath-taking. You sure master the genre of sensuality. Filled with so many deep emotions of passion, heat, and embrace. Loved these lines especially
"My body softening to this craving
For my need became my master
Racing beats and breathing faster
Self control passed, no longer waiving"
Amazing write you have penned here
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*fans myself* well this was great!! lol.. you did such a wonderful job!! ok now I'm going to read his.. lol. beautifully done sis like always.
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Sensual
you were not lying when you said you like sensual. The imagery in this is so beautiful. Very lucky man you write for.
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rhymic and undulateing
when we capture the moment, absorb into the sensual rhythm and know the beings of silver threads to the whole, is there nothing more pure than the feral and the sublime. A shared crecendo, or even envoked, a lover one... lucky Robert -
ooooooooh weeeeee ! ok wow.. sensualality is you thing huh? so incredible you rock
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Well I think that a cold shower is in need just now...lol
Great write loved it, the movement was wonderfull
Simon
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Homage
Hello there.
This is a wonderful homage. I hope Robert loved it. It's beautiful. The last line brings the poem to a lovely climax.
have a wonderful Easter weekend,
BJ.
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A very lovely piece of erotica...tasteful & so softly sensual...but still builds up enough in tension..very nice
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Wow, this is very honest and very sexual. It shows love and deep emotion. Time to let go of yourself. When you feel that rise upon your body, longing aching to embody the emotion and the pleasure. Very well written it defiently explains the emotions that arise.
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Love this flow of erotic pleasures
Each stanza is held within the powers of lust
Words are tantalising to say the least
And, and, and , its written for Robert
Bet his blood pressure rose and a quick shower under ice cold water was needed
Hugs
Julie
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Hot and wonderful!!! I just love your erotic writes...very nice!
Az
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ONE SEXY POEM TO ONE SEXY LADY
LUV IT
LUCKY ROBERT
hot as hell
fab read I need a shower now
abe
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I fold.
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Sweet permission
Hello there!
This is a wonderful write - very sensual and sexy and somehow relaxing. I felt the love in your words and between your lines. It sounbs like you had a very nice time in this poem.
This stanza really caught my eye and heart and soul:
Fulfilment dreamed of now in sight
Giving to each the sweet permission
To lose ourselves… no inhibition
Reaching crescendo in the night
hey! have a gr8 day,
BJ.
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Thank you so much! I've been trying a few writes in this genre lately!!
Glad you liked it! I shall visit your page soon!
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you are really great at this sensual writes! you make it sexy without going overboard!! Great job!!
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wow...darn...i have no idea where i should begin. everything is said to fulfill the need of lust, love, passion, and word desire. this piece greets the soul with powerful and sensual upliftment. wonderful tone. excellent taste of sensuality. the yern for touch is pouring out of the words you left on the page. this line is great amongst all of the others: ..."For need became my master..." that line crushed my eye'ids....i'm smiling long! GREAT poem!
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Ummm
I don't know what to say but WOW your poetry is really great
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Very tastefully done hunni, the imagery is rich and the flow/rhyme is as ever superb. I'm no expert with this theme but wow!! You seem to have an ever expanding talent....keep up exploring new themes
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Have ever considered writing romance novels, LOL! just kidding, but seriously though, this was HOT! *sigh*
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lol... no I haven't... but glad you enjoyed it! If you liked this.. you might also like Your Release...
Thanks hun!
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My name is not Robert :(
How is it that I missed this piece. Very beautiful sweets with such vibrant, raw emotion. Very sensual and extremely tasteful...youzaaa!
*oh, and my name isnt Robert so this must not be for me
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Passion unleashed
It speaks of release long witheld that two souls with such a wreckless abandon would give way to such mounting passion. With that moment consumed yet will there be remorse for lust and passion do not always lead to love ever after.
Yet in this so called modern world with such a varied menu as man and women have never before beeen presented it is surely forgivable to be of the flesh for one night of unforgetable abandonment.
I like it, I like it so!
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Can I hear you read this
I would love to hear you recite this as I'm sure it would be even more wonderful than I can imagine.
TC
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Such beautiful rhyme you hold in these pieces, such sensuality in this one, a gentle, soft love.... gorgeous
Karen
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Excellent
Very sensual and a fun poem. Your rhyme, rhythem with wonderful flow was fablulous. You do a great job with sensual writes. So neat you wrote it for someone special.
Tempos begin to rise and increase
Deep needs grasping and reaching
Our gazes lusting and beseeching
To give each other sweet release
I loved the phrase. So romantic and sensual!! Thank you for sharing with me, and also for all your support.
You are lovely
Kelle Marie
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Very sensual and well-written. Tender and filled with emotion. Your words are soft and yearning. "Lost in this dance of such yearning
We no longer cared for our restraint
Our bodies aching to acquaint
Skin touching skin, souls now burning" I especially liked this bit. Good work!
Wolfie
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Is it getting warm in here? Wow, beautiful crescendo as things go from playful to intense, and isn't that often the way things happen in those moments? Love it.
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I swear ive read this about 10 times lol, never got round to commenting on it though [pure laziness if you ask me] Good response though, i love it, a lot. You are too good for words! xx
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Memory of such occasions is wonderfully revived by the reading of this poem. The rhythm amd rhyme is excellent and it draws me on from one line to the next. Congratulations. Bob
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wow this is well good auntie
i love you
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I seriously have no idea how I have yet to come by you. Each piece I read of yours, I am left wanting more... this was absolutely gorgeous. I love the rhyme scheme how it changed a bit... made it interesting to read... And the word choice was divine!! You are a very talented poetess.
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Such love and power. Sensuality and passion.What a totally beautiful and sensous piece. Hot and intimate.!!!
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Ohhhhhh I really liked this & it does talk of the power of love, the emotions, & the closeness so well. You included so a wonderful enjoyable level of sensuality--I loved this part the most --
Lost in this dance of such yearning
We no longer cared for our restraint
Our bodies aching to acquaint
Skin touching skin, souls now burning
Tempos begin to rise and increase
Deep needs grasping and reaching
Our gazes lusting and beseeching
To give each other sweet release
Amazing words, you captivated me
Cindy
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worthy of a standing ovation, this side I'v e never seen before delights and tantalizes more than just the senses
's for you
Joe
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wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow.... thats all i can say this is.... WOW
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WOW YOU are simply amazing! THIS is sooooo AWESOME Princess, I LOVE IT! Please do more like this. I am so entranced with your words and flow. This is truly artistic and incredible writing. Thank you! xoxo
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again what a great poem .x. luv ya jacks
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damn
i really enjoyed this....the last paragraph was awsome
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Lucky Guy.....Kudos to ya.....
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Wow great poem, both sensual and emotional, you have really done a great job here, I hope robert like this, all in all a great work, love John
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boy o boy!
steamy! nice rhythm and great flow. superb write my friend!
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I think I hate Robert... Just kidding! Beautiful and sensual my friend. It must be wonderful to inspire someone to write such a lovely poem about you. Excellent!
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Excellent, sensual without be tasteless. It's actually quite romantic if you ask me, full of yearning. Great write.
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luv the title hehehe. ah well u already know wat i think bout this sizzling!!! mayb u'll dedicate one to me?? haha mayb i will for you lmao!
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