On this day, I give my life to you
Pledge my love for you
Knowing that you accept me
For not only the things I say
But also the things I represent and do.
On this day, I stand a humble woman
Eyes full of tears, heart full of love
Knowing that we will embark
On a life time of memories
To cherish for all of our days.
On this day, I take not only your name
But I take your heart for mine
Knowing that your soul
Matches each intricate design
That makes up my very being.
On this day, I can honestly say
There is no one else for me.
Knowing that I live for your happiness
Which becomes my happiness in return.
Knowing I have become yours.
On this day, you make me whole.
On this day, you complete my soul.
On this day, I just want you to know…
That you have changed my life
By making me your wife.
Author notes
considered these for my wedding vows, but went with the traditional.
A contest entry
- Wedding Vows. by Expression.
525 points, ended February 14, 2008, 15 entries
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Comments
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What sweet words
to hear coming from one and being said to another!
i really liked this! good write!
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Aww.. this is so sweet...i like how you repeated on this day...it adds much more emotion to ur words.
good luck and thank you for entering
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Sweet.
Write on sister.
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