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Whispers

A sound moves slowly across the sky
Traveling beyond all things that fly
It is a simple thing, a slight few words
They move to your ears, did you sigh?

A word that means one, just one
With a single letter, that is no fun
It stand alone by its nature, so similar
This "I" is the first word that will run

A word that binds and breaks, over all it creates
This word is of four letters and has many traits
It can be proud, humble, or even cried out loud
Most of all it is the action I wish to state.

This second word implies a picuture with a dove
It is much more than that however, it is "love"
It is an idea and being thus, it will live forever
With you and me, it will story legends are made of

The final word is more valuable than the first, it's true
For you see in that word lies "you"
My amazing angel and queen, you are perfect for me
I love you and I wait, but all this I think you knew

The whisper has made it to the fiance
And before she can turn around, it will say
With modest tone a great emotion "I love you"
You are the lady of my heart, my only way. 

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  • Luthien Luinwe
    January 30, 2008

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    Wonderful

    Wow! I love the creativity behind this and the way your mind works. This is a great poem about these three simple little words that mean so much!