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Blood sucker




Darkness savours,
its friendly sweet is dug
in a night of full moon,
crowd of many enemies.

Vampire, satan of night
give conjuration sweet heat
so great whip
dare not to have his love.

Tell me who enrages to stop you?
with so great power in hand
Who will dare to face?
one to be an owner of the darkness.

Screams and screams heard by alleys
waiting for perhaps in an illusion,
pure eyes, dry bodies,
may be not an imagination.

'Cause you taste tasty blood,
satisfies, quenches the hunger,
a mightier nobody,
not even a god not even a man.

In penetrating eyes I see a life
in blood congelante eternal death,
in search of liquíd vermilion,
of death, symbol of the life.

Black night wraps everything,
moon and blood.weigh in thoughts
all the pains, all laments,
in the death is not resolved.

Guttural anguish nobody hears;
voices come from a world of torments,
collapse all intentions
in ppains dissolved.

After the end, the sadness:
dry gesture does not hold
the swollen shaky, undefended soul.

Waiting for the future un-exist,
in anaemia, in night of uncertainty,
because tomorrow, will be still sadder!



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  • This is good, but spelling error- ppains, The beginning was a little boring, and the ending could have been stronger, but the poem is pretty good. I'm not really fan of vampires, but you did o.k.