The way you tease me baby
that look in your eye
You've got me so hungry
for your touch
So wet with my desire
your sweat so tasty
I want to tell you how to please me
just got to have it soon
Got to get it harder
make me scream
Get a little rough with me
make our bodies tremble and release
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This is good!!
Get a little rough with me
make our bodies tremble and release
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Oh. This is a nice little poem that you have going on here.
It was short but I guess that you just had some interesting images going on in your head and you felt like you needed to get them out? That's what it sounded like to me.
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Nice
very nice and alittle short but you cover the missing ground very well -
Very well written
I like the last stanza the best. Very short and to the point, yet filled with very well written descriptives.
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thanks
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