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A hand upon her face


The pain is excruciating
As you kiss her ungrateful cheek
The betrayal beyond what I thought possible
Her hand grasps yours
Tightly you interlace your fingers
A sign of "true love"
Here I sit with your sweaters hitting me in the face.
Watching through a crack in the doorway.
Two months ago. That was me.
Lying in your bed, being told I was "beautiful", "amazing", and "the only one for you".
I can't believe I bought that despicable lie.
I wonder why I still love you.. And you love her.
She’s not even that pretty. She’s annoying (well so my friends say)
How could you bring her home... to the people we shared.
Why are they interacting with her?
I don't want you back now (probably riddled with diseases)
But I don’t want you with her!

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Not sure if this is what your looking for but im going through this right now.. you can dq it if u want

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  • lindaburns gold member
    July 17, 2008

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    OUCH! How painful. Your flow is fairly good and your depiction is vivid. The cad. Let’s horse whip him!!


  • I write art
    January 31, 2008
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    deep