Your words… they
S.C.R.E.A.M
Into my soul
These words full of hurt
B/L/E/E/D
Into my ears
Dragging me down into this shock
So much hurt
So much pain
In your words of agony
The tears
L
E
A
K
From my eyes
I have hurt you
And in the process..
Have hurt myself
I have made you this way
I am the one who
B
R
O
K
E
Your beating heart
And left you with you dreams…
Your hopes…
Your wishes,
I left them
...CRUSHED...
But this doubt
This guilt it
((whispers))
It whispers in the dark
Seeing me for what I really am.
I am a
_L.Y.E.R_
I am a
_S.I.N.N.E.R_
I am your
_H.E.A.R.T-B.R.E.A.K.E.R_
Author notes
the blood in the picture is fake. but i thought it went great with the poem.
RedKryptonite
A contest entry
- Got A Crush On A Pretty Pistol [[+Round Two+]] by brittany.geeze.
360 points, ended February 28, 2008, 7 entries
Silver trophy winner
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But this doubt
This guilt it
((whispers))
It whispers in the dark
just thought i'd let you know that's what got you into round three. -
There is some minimal grammatical error but overall it's nice, it's interesting to see this side of a heartbreak, usually we see the one who had their heart broken but never see the side of the heart breaker. Thanks for the insight.
=D
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I LOVE THIS!
I have nothing else to say...
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Nice use of a little dirty pretty. I love the concept of that form of writing. I've been meaning to get around to experimenting with it myself. You used it effectively here. Good write.
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Very creative layout of the text. Visually pleasing and supports the content. alby
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