With each new day
I miss you more and more
I have only faint desires
each yearning to find a way
The tears will fall
and the lips will quiver
with each thought
of losing it all
The guilt will rage
fueled by lost desires
and unanswered questions
penned onto each and every page
The heart will die
cracking
and fracturing
with each tear I cry
The fate of our love weaves
a mat
of painful deception
from a heart the decieves
The pain shall subside
day after day
and eventually I will learn to live again
without a pain to hide
Author notes
thiis is about my very rocky relationshp, that currentlly appears to be built on all the wrong things
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I liked this. Its pretty good. Its sad though however. But overall I liked it. Thanks for entering and best of luck to you in my contest.
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nice verse, I like the flow of it, hope your personal life improves.
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Rawr Monkey
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this is a great write and i really like the part "the pain shall subside day after day and eventually i will learn to live again without a pain to hide" thank you for entering in my contes
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