Its like a bomb for insanity, save me from humanity
All Im asking is dont let me fall,
because look at what Ive got..Nothing, nothing at all.
Im sick and tired of you trying to change me.
Screw me up, Plastic-Poser, rearrange me.
Attention is the only drug, The only thing that keeps us sane.
Havent you heard only fake friends hug, So youre winning at this game.
The strongest hug,, The biggest lie.
The overdosed drug,, The reason she cries.
Nothing left, youve taken it all.
the only dignity I have left is what it takes to crawl.
Im tired of you telling me what to do, how to act, who to be.
Im gonna be who I am and I dont care what you wanna see.
Get over your damn gourmet,
I barely last, day to day.
Quit acting like emotions are wrong,
because have you even heard the lyrics to your favorite song?
It tells who you are,
So stop judging me.
Youre not perfect,
You only act to be.
I am real, whether you like it or not,
And Im not gonna change, in case you forgot
A contest entry
- Randomnesss by Hated..
500 points, ended February 10, 2008, 13 entries
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Comments
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wow shelby......its reaallllly good!!!
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i like it a lot and i understand it to. i love how it pretty much ses ur not gonna let ne1 change u
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Wow. I love it. It's a great write. ^_^ Keepitup.
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I love it and still do. I want more!
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not bad at all, its flows very well with a strong sense of abandonment yet independance, good job
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I know and feel exaclty what you are saying in this piece, good write,
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i really like this, it has so much truth built into it. im like you in this, people are always trying to change me, but theres nothing wrong whit who i am. dont ever let anyone change who you are or influance who you want to be.
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this is a great write about yourself. I love the honesty and the message that your not going to change for anyone and your going to be you and if they dont like that too bad.
great write
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bravo! beautimous! me hearts. it almost sounds like it could be a rap song? but anyways...yay! go you!
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lol yeah i guess it kinda does sound like it, haha, but yeah thanks glad you like it!
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ShelbieLynn
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what most people think about cutters r th@ we r just fucked up people but we do it because it gives us feeling
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wow. this poem relates to society very well. and it is very true. everybody is so judgemental of everybody else, and they continue to try and change them. i really like the way you described this in the lines
Im sick and tired of you trying to change me.
Screw me up, Plastic-Poser, rearrange me.
they really helped to capture the message behind the poem. awesome write.
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Thanks!
I just wrote this yesterday and I havent written anything in quite a whiloe, but i was pretty much just fed up with ppl trying to make me like them. So yeah, thanks so much!
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ShelbieLynn
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