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Seduce My Soul

Laying in bed wide awake in the a.m. hour of three,
closing my eyes hoping to dream of an angel with the
greatest of sex appeal to come and take me to highest,
point of ecstacy. Silken lips, velvet smoothe skin,
leaving me breathless with your beauty, the way you
approach me stripping my heart, devouring my soul.

Filling me with so much pleasure, as you caress my body
with the tip of your wings. My hands explore your tender
breasts, while over me you sway your hips, strands of hair,
fall over my face, like your kiss there is no sweeter taste.
Your eyes reflect images to our place, where eternity creates
our love. Sweat drips as we combine our every particle,
drowning in our cream, soft petals rub against our bodies
our inner depths explode, you collapse ontop of me, whisper
"I love you, we are now one forever my love." A bright light
shines from a distance, as sunrise starts to come.

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I love you so very much my goddess♥

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  • shay14star
    August 21

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    i like

    i like who u choose an angel i thought that was a good touch and i was very moving cant wait to read me


  • spiritraven
    April 27
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    Very nice

    I love the flow and the magic. Hope to see more like this


  • cLeAnSEd
    April 26

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    that was amazing, truely, ive never heard it put so elegently, the way you feel is on a level i cant even begin to comprehend, well done

  • SilentMoonlight
    August 6, 2008
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    Wow. This poem contains the kind of love, intimacy and depth that most people can only dream about. It just so personal ... honestly doll this kind of made me jealous Wish I had someone like this. But really doll you did amazing with this; so much emotion cramed into a few sentences. Just amazing.

    -Jordanne

  • OurxBeginning
    January 29, 2008

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    Awww baby, this is so beautiful. I love it so much. You're everything to me and you brighten my life so much. You deliver me SO much happiness! this makes me blush, because I know what it pertains to, and I can relate so much. The imagery in this is just amazing and so delicate. Just like our love. You amaze me so much and I have always loved and adored your writing. It just has a way of seeping into me, I guess because the words come from you. I loved that this was so subtle and not very hardcore erotic. Well I like them both, but you know what I mean. Thank you for this wonderful piece. Sure have missed your beautiful words. I love you, my queen.

    Forever and Always♥

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