I came by to tell you to your face
it’s over, she said. I’m out of here.
I sit on the porch watching her
deliver The Speech. She runs a slender
hand through her silky hair.
I stare
first at her sad blue eyes, flecked
with sorrows
then at the cleavage of her breasts.
She shifts her weight to a hip.
I’m tired of this, she says. I never know
where I stand with you.
A helicopter circles overhead
sniffing for sin.
Sirens wail, dogs bark.
This is not Mr. Rodgers’ neighborhood.
Is that what you want? I ask
To know where you stand?
I watch the woman across the street
sitting with her legs crossed.
The wind flips her skirt high
exposing her lovely thighs.
I’m not just a piece of ass, she says.
Someone to fuck
when you’re feeling horny.
I stand up, take her by the hand
lead her inside the house.
We step over empty beer bottles
on the way to my bed.
No, she says. I’m not going to fuck you.
She sits down
on the edge of my bed.
I sit down and run my hand
up the inside of her parted thighs.
I won’t lie, I say.
I don’t know where you stand.
You bastard, she says.
What did I ever see in you?
Her lips pout. Her mouth
makes my cock hard.
I won't suck you off, she says.
I rub my middle finger
up and down her cunt. It's wet
under slick silk. She closes her eyes.
Please don't, she says.
I push her down onto the bed.
She spreads her legs apart
wide.
I pull her panties down to her ankles
put my mouth on her pussy
lick her clit.
Do you think you can just fuck me
like this? she asks.
Yes, I say. I flick her clit
with my tongue.
She arches her back.
I unbuckle my belt, drop my pants.
She scoots back on the bed.
This is the last time, she says.
I swear it is.
I know, baby, I say.
I slide my cock inside her.
She wraps her legs around my ass.
She moans, bucks against me.
I fuck her until she cums twice.
Why do you do this to me?
She opens her eyes and asks.
Because you're the best, I say.
I light a cigarette.
Because I love you.
I knew you did, she smiles.
She sits up and adjusts her dress.
Then why did you ask?
Because a girl needs to hear it sometimes,
she says. She lifts her hair, sighs,
then lets it fall all over her face.
I learn something new from her
everytime she fucks me.
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Written November 16th, 2003
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interesting
Goodbye to Cisco Kid??? Then it must have blown your mind!! -
balanced
i enjoyed the tension and teasing in this graphic narrative poem full of sex and relationship questioning. it owes a little to Bukowski's raunchiness, yet this is more balanced and tender...
a well-considered poem...thanks for sharing it...it sounded real to me, which is a big compliment...
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those tits are obscene!!!! and the hair is like ribbons. where do you find these chicks?
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pretty good
Stumbled across this- pretty good. As many have said- I know the game, lol. Fun to play. Good stuff, I'll have to check out more of you
<--her boobs are far too big
~Zeek -
usually i hate reading other peoples erotica but fuck...if i had a cock they'd be some stirring in my pants hahahahahaha
nice one, it worked for me!
jess
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Oh I've played this game before ... it's very fun and exciting yes ..
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Okay.. I've just had a cardiac episode.. nearly had to reach for my GTN spray.. heheheheheh.. you can't do this to a gal whose just worked 4 night shifts..DAMN YOU!!!
It's much too early for squirmning on seats..
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The better to go for the jugular with, my pretty
Hehehehe...
~Cisco~
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well... this isn't quite what I was expecting, but it was better. I like that you said you loved her, though this is one of the odder ways it has been said in a poem, I believe, when just reading it it seems like a purely sexual relationship. Anyway, great write. very hot. Thanks for sharing. keep it up.
~Miranda
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great
I liked this poem. I love it when my boyfriend says he loves me...
Best wishes and God Bless
-Brittany
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<--what big jugs she has.
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hee hee hee ... I saw this in promotion and thought, "fuck, don't tell me cisco kid is calling it quits" and openned fully expecting ... well, I'm not quite certain what I was expecting. But .. I found cisco at his finest.
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I like this.. rather different from all the poems I've read before.. most of them about people being love sick,, those who cut themselves because someone deserted them and others who threaten to suicide etc.. but you have taken poetry to a whole new level.. This looks more like a story than a poem - you don't stick to the traditonal form nor the traditional rhyme scheme which I think added beauty to your poem..
Good job
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Arousing
I'm Jealous!.. I love the game.. I'll deny, you take.. show me what i really want and make me like it..Then i'll admit how much i really wanted it..All in the name of Love -
I got to the third paragraph when suddenly I was so smitten by my own cleavage that I had to blow myself.
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great imagery and wonderful read
I really enjoyed this piece. I loved the way you realized that a girl just needs to hear it every now and again. It was also alittle steamy, all the little visuals. Great write. Hugs~ Cuddles -
Well, this should be in erotica, simply because its got sex, in my opinion... anyways, I wasn't sure what to think. She sure seemed willing enough. Reminds me of my boyfriend's ex, she was pretty loose and I swear that's all she used him for... anyways... I assume the controversy was about some comment regarding rape... she seemed quite willing, but some girls have a rape fetish... anyways pretty well written and interesting, because of the drama. The only flaw I found was "let's" should be "lets" (the spelling you used would mean let us, rather than allow as the context would indicate).
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A fucking plus and a fucking men. great write, the best of yours that i have read.
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awesome
this is..wow. Seriously the most interesting writings..
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And the winner of talent is!
No lack of stylisation here.
Coloring connection within the frames of this work is masterful.
Many walls painted with many hues all from one main color..
You Cisco Kid, never fail to insight me,to the seas of art and talent..Bravo! -
damn all men....you enticing jerks.....but..i must say..this was a pretty hot write...when i started reading it i figured it would turn out into a big ass argument...but instead it turned out to be you having hot sex......mmmmmm....twas a nice write..once again you got me goign with all those 'bad' words...
'I learn something new from her
everytime she fucks me.'
lol...i thoguth that was pretty funny...you always seem to put humor in your poems...and i think that adds a lot to it...anyway...yea...great write cisco...u horn dog you
Kaila
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Oh, you naughty boy...
The dialogue here is really good, the details are very descriptive (a signature Cisco piece for sure...lol) I love the seduction and the tender ending.
Very entertaining poem, i felt like i was watching when i shouldn't have been a few times...lol
Enjoyed,
~ Wendy -
You guys...really, really piss me off...LOL the way some of you can take we ladies to a place we don't wanna be at all & make us like it..love it...want it...
~ahem~
very well written piece,and if she didn't really want it..would you really have made her do it?
been there..no means no for sure...but dayum those times, such as you played out here..that no falls by the wayside & we give in cause it feels so good!
much love & peace
~Pamela -
apoeticwetdream:-)
facinating relationship dynamic there cisco
I enjoy the very honest style and the brass tacks tone of your poetry
it gives an insight to a style of life that not all
red-blooded-americans (or any nationality whatever can appreciate)
I'm sure you opened some eyes
and made others realize they prefered to have them shut :-)
but you can't convince a blind man now can you?
havoc,
Havoc -
A fanfuckingtastic poem, Cisco! One of your best!
The mood you set with your tone of voice and the environment you paint is powerful. “This is not Mr. Rodgers’ neighborhood.” And this is not the Hollywood Romantic Fantasy. This is gritty and real-life, a woman who wants more than a great fuck. She wants to be loved as well. But she’s no dummy. She’s not giving up the hot animal sex (two orgasms? Heheheh, Cisco...my phone number is—well, you already have it. Now CALL it! LMAO)
You love to feed that bad-outlaw-but-good-little-boy image of Cisco Kid! Be matter of fact, aloof, go for the sexual kill, be flippant (I learn something new from her everytime she fucks me) But always, ALWAYS give her what she longs for – the “I love you” that makes her know she’s more than just another piece of ass.
As for that idiot comment by the seriously sick and fucked up Suicidaldreamer, I hope you leave it there so all can see it for what it really is ~ A pathetic “everything-wrong-with-me-is-someone-else’s-fault” cop out. I detest people who never take responsibility for their own lives.
Hot poem, Cisco! And an insightful statement on man-woman and the sport of sex!
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rawr. i'm not sure what else to say just now. SOMEbunny sure was upset over this. probably projecting his/her own experiences. some people see/hear one word they find to be offensive and shut down to the rest. i never once thought that the girl of your write was being forced to do anything. some people just play those games in their relationships.
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Some of the comments here are really good, and they explore all the dynamics of this poem, the fact its highly erotic, the fact that its blunt but delivered in the tone that makes you understand why her panties would be wet while her mouth is saying no...
And that in society, this can be classed as a different act depending on your outlook, and experience.
Although, ~smirks~ there's no mistaking her intention...and who could blame her. Twice. ~sigh~ lol
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Next time she asks where she stands tell her what one of my ex bozos (who will remain nameless) told me.
"I'm sorry if I confused you but my cock is just a tool and not my confession of love. I feel no need to hold your hand be your valentine, sign any papers that joins us for life. But I do like the way your bush smells if thats any comfort at all."
Listen to the lady Kid, Because a girl needs to hear it sometimes, we need to hear it sometimes and....oh nevermind. You been spying on me? Hehehe. Cool poem Kid, now do me. hahaha
Desiree
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my answer to your poem:
someday will come a time when i,
melt the wax inside your thighs
and those sweet words you held within
will grow old and stale
in you again
the soft embrace you forced me through,
lost a piece of me in you,
and although you think you're in control,
i now know, you would never let me go
so follow me around at night
soften up the november lights
sit alone in dark cafes'
give invisible women guiltless praise
and mark this through your heart tonight
even though the sun is shining....
doesnt mean there's light!
(there's light)
just because the sun is shining
doesnt mean there's light
~Daina, oh by the way...check my website, for the answer to your question you asked before.
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Do Me Baby
Hey buddy, you can rape me any ol' day.
Some people just can not appreciate the art of (un)forced sex. sing song voice "Mooooorooooonnnnssss"
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be creative : be happy
"I learn something new from her
everytime she fucks me."...
very similiar story (sort of)of my ex-wife...
everytime I learnt something
it was that she had fucked me ....agin!!!....
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This was pretty hot!! mmmm
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i shouldn't have read the comments to this before i left my own...cuz right now i am laughing my ass off at suicidaldream...
Rape??? hardly...you don't keep spreading your legs when it is a NO...lol. And i would say that while i read this piece...it was pretty obvious that she was willing...but wanted "more." And apparently you "gave her your all" CK! lol...and then some. But the woman conjured in this write is very real...and understandable. I liked the plain-speak and honesty of it. Well done as always
UB
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Cisco.. I ..well I'm speechless, man .. um, who could say goodbye to such seduction
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HOT
Let me read it again ~She sounded pretty yes this is the last time consenting individual to me~Awesome visuals ~ Time for some serious ice tea ~Keep them coming please ~Great write and look forward to more~Big hugs 
and much love~Desire
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Thanks, Suicidal. It's always good to hear from the other side, the one's who really know what a woman who lies on her back and spreads her legs wide apart really means when she says "no." I was wondering about that...
Appropriate name you have there, by the way.
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Definitely something to be said for straight forward sex, and a man who can write about it. I imagine this would piss off a whole lot of ladies....but secretly...they wish they were her.
Hugs..
Enjoyed this one..
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Well, Cisco, sounds like you have an attraction to those high drama type girls. I used to pick fights with my hubby just so we could make up like this. Now I have discovered something better than make-up sex... that is plain old animal passion.
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