The trees rustle their
limbs and leaves, as she
dances freely among them
Blades of grass bow, as
she glides above them
and blows them kisses
She gives comfort in the
treacherous heat, by cooling
all who can't find shade
Carries kites, for the
youngsters amuzement and
even has a knack for sailing
Mighty at times and subtle
at other times, she can be
a gentle breeze or a hurricane...
Author notes
"WIND"
In a list
A contest entry
- 182nd Contest by Tarja.
450 points, ended January 31, 2008, 11 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Elements by BeautifullyBroken42.
425 points, ended February 16, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Awesome poem. The image fit perfactly. I think it will recieve another award in my contest but no guarnetes. Great poem. A joy to read. Good luck (but you won't need it)
~Ruth~ -
Tarja says it, a great write and congratulations on your well deserved award. A beautiful write and one I've just enjoyed so much. Thanks for sharing. Beautiful words to a beautiful picture.
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Nicely shared ...
and congratulations for the Gold! joy
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Woah... this was absolutely fantastic. I like that you used the picture... it gave the poem a lot of realism and your poem gave the picture a personality.
Well done you were able to make each art compliment each other. Thank you so much for this entry... I truly enjoyed it. Good luck.
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