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My Thoughts

The TV goes on,
but I don't listen.
My mind is on you,
once again.
What are you doing?
What are you thinking?
My thoughts are of you.
I don't know why,
but my mind is yours.
10 seconds to think
about what is on my mind.
Easy you and you alone.
My music plays
and the tv goes on,
but in my thoughts
I'm with you,
laying on my bed
talking to no end.
Thinking about you is easy,
it's almost like breathing.
My thoughts are of you.
 

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10 seconds to think of something... I think of her...

A contest entry

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  • Andarael
    March 20, 2008
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    Nice poem. I can identify. Best of luck.


  • SchizoChic
    March 17, 2008
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    I know how this feels. Best of luck to you.


  • thejollytinker
    February 20, 2008

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    Those damn people we love get under our skin, huh? I enjoyed this, it rings of truth and experience. Thank you for your kind comment- I'll be dodging thunderbolts from the big guy for that one...


  • Noir mariposa...x gold member
    January 29, 2008

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    Awww, how cute and sweet

    "The TV goes on,
    but I don't listen.
    My mind is on you,
    once again."

    Awesome opening

    I wish you luck in your contest!

    ~*~* Angel *~*~


  • GodsTrueSoldier
    January 29, 2008
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    AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW. xD somebody is in love =D.

    I love the poem like all the poems entered...beautiful and original..I feel that you like her alot...I feel what you wrote i could see what you wrote very nice. Nicely written and very cute feelings. Thank you for entering!

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