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Screams

 

corpses are lost

in lakes of longing;

bones shattered, impacts.

they fell from the bluffs,

that melted into mist.

 

carbon dioxide freezes limbs,

permafrost. acid burns.

frost bitten fingers

chip off. expendable parts.

 

pure sorrow, naked ribs.

they crouch in shallow swamps

where their limbs are exposed

to winter's chill.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Melted Dawn
Image by offering at deviantart.com

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  • OhEmetophobia
    May 6

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    So haunting and intense. Relates to the picture you've included wonderfully. Wow. Really blew me away! Congrats on the bronze; you earned it.


  • b l o o d-b l o o d
    January 30

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    i love tis its filled with an imagedry
    that takes my breath away,,

    great job and keep writing

    yuo have an amazing talen

  • whiterabbit--x
    January 29

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    I really love this. The imagery is just wonderful and so eerie. Your details and descriptions are perfect. Amazing job and thanks for entering.