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Mercy of The Sleep God

Sleep crashes into me
like waves into a wall
eylids quickly closing
my head begins to fall

For once no thoughts of love
or complications fill my mind
for once my whole knows peace
for once Sleep God is kind

Wistfully i float
through a sea of dark
the shore of thought unwelcome
"Sleep come to me. Come Hark!"

A journey i do take
on a current flowing swift
waterfalls of dreams
and streams of nightmares shift

The God of Sleep i worship
merciless but great
his judgment rains down on me
and alas it holds no hate.

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  • Cross
    February 6, 2008

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    "For once no thoughts of love
    or complications fill my mind
    for once my whole knows peace
    for once Sleep God is kind"
    My favorite stanza of this piece of work, but most of all I love the imagery you captured!