D D D C# E D
D E F# G F# C#
C# E F# D
C# C# F# E D C# B
She played to her desire
And played affection
Of notes and peace
Though a message in the song
E G F# F# E D E D C#
B B F# E C# G F#
C# G F# E D C# B C#
D C# F# F# D C# A B
She weeps under the mo-on light
Notes mean more then the Sou-nd
Her songs were played with emo-tion
Now we know the moon-lite words
B F# E D C# D G F#
G F# E G F# D C# F# E F#
G F# C# E C# B G F# E
F# G A B C E# A
G F# E
Come sail away on my tears
Waiting so reclusive Tears I have cried
Watching love slip from me hastily
But I've waited so-o long
Too Long
C# D+F# D+F#
B D+F# D+F#
A D+G D+G
F#+ A#+F#
Repeat
Tru lu lu
Deu Du Du
Sorrowful
Song
Wanting And
Needing Will
I get true
Love
Author notes
I know this is confuzing but I'm going to record it soon so then I can put a link up so then you can listen an I did use 3 words piano is in the title. If you're ever at a piano try this song I made it up with the poem. and yes there are notes that are wrote the same but in different octives so just hold on till i can record.
I hope you like this poem no rhyming but i like it my self. Please leave a comment thx much
A contest entry
- Options. by ThisIsMyWonderland.
425 points, ended February 4, 2008, 7 entries
Honorable mention
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Comments
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I can't wait to hear it recorded. Its wonderful written so I hope it does successful posted as a song! I think the way you worded your 2nd stanza was a bit too much, it threw me off and turned me away from finishing it pureley based on the fact that I didn't get why it was there, but hopefully when its recorded I will understand. Luckily in poetry you do not need those dashes to help your beat it just comes naturally when reading.
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thx xo much, i wish i could record it now, my recording system on my computer messed up so i can't record i
but that's ok it'll get fix sometime
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