i await you
on swingsets that groan,
calling you home.
Author notes
After two years, I'm still driving myself mad trying to find a way to bring you back...
Rest in peace, sweetie.
A contest entry
- Quickie by Starz of Heaven.
475 points, ended January 29, 2008, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Just to make sure you heard, this is so sad. Not much else to say really, except beautiful and I loved how you used the swingset image. 
Jeanette*~
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This is so sad...a great write, well earning the bronze trophy for sure. I enjoyed the read.
Kelli -
Oh noooooooo. I read it and then your notes and they hit me like a sledge hammer. Gutted. Lovely.
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Very sad. What's a swingset?
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This is so sad Goodluck in the contest
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Another interesting take on insanity... very well written. Best of luck in the contest. xxxx
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