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jamie

i await you
on swingsets that groan,
calling you home.

Author notes

After two years, I'm still driving myself mad trying to find a way to bring you back...

Rest in peace, sweetie.

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  • Puking Faerie Dust gold member
    May 19

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    Just to make sure you heard, this is so sad. Not much else to say really, except beautiful and I loved how you used the swingset image.
    Jeanette*~


  • Kelli Marie gold member
    March 7
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    This is so sad...a great write, well earning the bronze trophy for sure. I enjoyed the read.
    Kelli

  • Pretani gold member
    January 30

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    Oh noooooooo. I read it and then your notes and they hit me like a sledge hammer. Gutted. Lovely.


  • Edna Sweetlove
    January 29
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    Very sad. What's a swingset?
  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    January 29
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    This is so sad Goodluck in the contest

  • Anguas-Confusion gold member
    January 29
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    Another interesting take on insanity... very well written. Best of luck in the contest. xxxx
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