Opened up
Madness escaped
No return
To the sane world
Author notes
prompt insane
A contest entry
- Quickie by Starz of Heaven.
475 points, ended January 29, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
please tell me what you really think
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You have summarized insaniy wide open my daughter.Bravo on this amazing piece.
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beautiful. what more is there to say?
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EMMA, I think that a poet who can sweep you away into their world with only 10 little words is astounding! I have stood on that very edge with "No return To the sane world". I am glad that your express through poetry has help to heal your burdens, it surely has lifted mine. Words are truly powerful, aren't they? Many blessings, my friend, Doris
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Very well done, simple but well crafted. I like the shape of this poem. Best of luck in the contest. xxxxx
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Thank you for your entry goodluck
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powerfully written with a simple but very effective vocab that really captures the prompt.well done sis
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