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The Fourteenth of Forever

You are the living Valentine

that bears its beat within my heart.

I throb and quiver from you every touch,

as my soul hums an everlasting serenade of joy,

which rings out from the depths of my sprit

with love's sweet and purest refrain,

resonating in constant praise towards Heaven

for the precious gift your angel essence

shared as prize of God's grace,

mercifully blessing into my day and being.

 

No more do I ache from only tasting shadows,

of never seeing February's calendar page

become more than just another month.

Now the Fourteenth I will savor always

to give thanks eternally for Cupid's bow

aimed so perfectly at my chest,

finding its mark and leaving me no complaint.

 

For I am happily wounded now, but bleeding only passion,

holding dearly onto the vision of your face

just to breathe with exhales that cherish

having you in my life.

Always do I wait in prayer to hear your voice,

it shines with gold from your seraph flame,

adorning me with happiness from all you are

and the harmony we feel when our pulse is one.

  

Oh my darling, who is the sonnet of ecstasy

written so intensely in my mind,

please be my Valentine,

not for one day,

but forever.

 

 

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A Valentine's sent to my AP wife, Desire.

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  • Angels Whispers gold member
    February 11, 2008

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    Beautiful

    Hello Penman,
    I have just finished reading your entry, and must tell you how much i have enjoyed the read.This would have to be the best love poem that i have ever read.It is filled with so much passion and love.The reader can easily feel your emotions through your written words, and the visuals are awesome...so romantic and loving.You have penned an excellent write and you were a pleasure to read.Thank you for sharing your heart, and best wishes for you in the contest.
    Take care and many blessings.
    Angel.


    • penman gold member
      February 11, 2008
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      Thank you for the kindness of all your wonderful words.


  • lake of dremas
    February 7, 2008
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    ô godness! you're so sweet! liked it so much!


  • rosepoet
    February 7, 2008

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    Awesome write!!!! Words expressed here flow straight from one heart to another heart's of love and passion.
    Impressive deep meaning of love for valentine. poet


  • Desire gold member
    February 3, 2008

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    Love this!!

    Beautiful words You have penned Sweetness which touch me to the core again and You know what that does to me
    Sorry it took me some time to inhale Your words but had Internet hiccups~and what a treat for me to come online too
    Love this piece and You
    You have honored me and brought forth bliss
    with a HUGE smile
    across my flushed face~~~

    Woooooooooooo Hooooooooooooooo

    Cupid did not have to chase me with his bow also arrow with bulls eyes on my bum
    I just picked that lucky penny up...and
    BAM~~~
    Full moon or what
    j/k
    Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Voice~
    Many blessings to You in the contest busy bee
    Best wishes too
    and my Love~ Desire~*~

  • mrme gold member
    February 3, 2008

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    I must say, you have a very descriptive and unique poem here my poet friend. An excellent write. You have written some very beautiful lines here. I especially like "For I am happily wounded now, but bleeding only passion". That is a line I wish I would have written.
    As someone else pointed out, this line is excellent also "Oh my darling, who is the sonnet of ecstasy
    written so intensely in my mind". Excellent write. There's no way anyone could refuse being your Valentine with this write.


  • Lost-Rose-Petal
    January 30, 2008

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    Your love poems seem to be my favorite...
    The emotion in them is wonderful!
    And how could they not be so full of emotion when they ae written about the wonderful Desire!
    Such a muse she is!!
    L-R-P


  • going nowhere
    January 30, 2008

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    what can be said other than... this is so beautiful. it makes me want to have a valentine... a forever kind. she will love this, i'm sure.


  • Amera gold member
    January 29, 2008

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    Aww.... she's going to love this; what woman wouldn't. I'm such a sucker for love poems and you pen them so well.
    "Oh my darling, who is the sonnet of ecstasy
    written so intensely in my mind,
    please be my Valentine,
    not for one day,
    but forever."

    You know she'll say "yes"

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    January 29, 2008

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    Ohhh, Des is gonna love this. It almost made me swoon and honey, that does not happen! This is so full of warmth, love and just a gorgeous pen. Bravo!


  • Midnight Lace
    January 29, 2008

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    Awwww Penman this is such an amazing tribute of love and passion for someone that obviously means the world to you. Its so refreshing to read poems about a love like the one you have captured in this masterfully penned poem. The person in whom you have written this for would be foolish not to say yes to you for it is clear that you have penned this straight from your heart. Best wishes to you in your contest!
    Midnight

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