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Insane

Not quite there,
Mind is it's own,
The real me, gone.

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I know it's one over.... sorry!

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  • penman gold member
    January 29, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Congratulations on the silver.


  • Sandra R Reynolds gold member
    January 29, 2008
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    Great on the prompt.

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    January 29, 2008
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    I cant count tonight thank you for your entry *hgu*


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    January 29, 2008
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    THat was both simple & deepish
    Which is what makes it good!


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    January 29, 2008

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    powerfully written sis and really captures the prompt with strength and truth.simple but oh so effective.

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