Another night of blood and tears for the ones I love;
Another night to drink away my fears and for never being good enough.
Everyone around me warned me about this, but I chose to ignore
I should have seen this coming, it has happened before.
I messed this up and I'm taking all the blame
I messed up everything and I've never felt so ashamed.
I had a feeling you'd help ruin everything for me
I had a feeling and I should have followed my first instinct and let everything be.
She was right, you should never date your bestfriends
She was right, you just screw eachother over in the end
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wow amazing poem....loved every bit of it
"Another night of blood and tears for the ones I love;
Another night to drink away my fears and for never being good enough.
Everyone around me warned me about this, but I chose to ignore
I should have seen this coming, it has happened before."
can relate to them so well!! keep up the good work and good luck in all the contests! xx -
sad
She was right, you should never date your bestfriendsShe was right, you just screw eachother over in the end
Good write sometimes that's true, like this poem, and I'm not a top big of a reader, but good job, and well done
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great write...
although i do hope it never happend to you before!
things like this are totally sad....thankx for writing an amazing poem!
ttfn
ta-ta-for-now
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amazing write hun xx
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nice, I hope its not true, friends should be froever, dating wouldnt matter in the end...
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This is so sad. Too many times best friends end up enemy's after dating. This seems like it went to the extreme in ending up bad. I like how this is written. It flows and rhymes well. I like the repetition at the beginning of many of the verses too.
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amazing job.
emotions were great.
your rhymes were good.
Not forced at all.
I like it.
Awesome job poet :]
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awe This poem is so sad. I know exactly how you feel. I've been through this exact thing. >.< It sucks. But, trust me, it gets so much better. ^_^ Great write! Good luck in the contest. :]
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