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As Time Wavers

In bowing romance they dance in zephyr's breath
whispering admiration under Spring's azure skies.
Elements have bestowed rebirth; Creation's story
regeneration of many wombs of existence.
Heartbeats of life vibrate in eons of wisdom
waving in breezes that speak of ancient timea.
Stories of pristine waterfalls of paradise
as all roamed freely within hushed awe.
For although generations return with change of season
legends they seem to be in today's cacophany.

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Prompt - The Flutter Of Spring Tales

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  • wakingdevil
    January 31, 2008

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    Wonderfully written!beautiful imagery and flow.Well deserving of the gold, congrats


    • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
      January 31, 2008
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      Thank you so much for your wonderful comments and applause, I am honoured
      Gaylene


  • penman gold member
    January 30, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.


  • maggiejamespoet silver member
    January 30, 2008

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    Beautiful poem with outstanding imagery and generates a lot to think about and admire for the reader. Good luck in the contest!