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Words

Words drop down
Like rain to the ground
They puddle around

Actions tear me apart
Like a gun to the heart
They play their part

One more shot and I'm gone
I now lay crying on the front lawn
I was just a pawn....

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  • Bleeding On Paper
    January 29, 2008
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    `this was a wonderful piece i loved the imagery and story line to this


  • madskillbassist1
    January 29, 2008
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    I like how this poem flows. It gives you very good imagery.