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Tuathal

Small pebble
Little one
Bearcub roar
The faerie comes

Stepping down from wooden bough
Fine fey feet upon falling leaf
She stands before him
Willowy fingers running through his hair

"Dear son,"
Voice a wind through the trees
Purple eyes like swollen stormcouds
"Go and be one of them."

She leaves
He knows
The soft flutter of whispery wings
Exile

It was a Sunday that they found him
Half drowned in a summer stream
Wearing nothing but the water
Sleeping away a fey summer's dream

He lives and breathes as the wingless ones
The son of Wataame's adoptive love
Gathering what wisdom he may
For the day that he returns to her side

What waits for him in the world of men?

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  • Melodies
    February 1, 2008

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    Oh, I do admire and truly love this darling enchanted adventure. So cleverly written and penned. Thank you for sharing this with us, for it is precious.


  • BlueEyeWonder1988
    January 30, 2008

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    I am sorry to misunderstand . . .

    I don't know what a Tuathal is can explain in the notes possibly? So I can understand your tale more. I like it and the words I just don't understand the meaning. Make it clear but creative as I stated. Good try , though. Keep writing , and goodluck in my contest.


    • Demington
      January 30, 2008
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      Tuathal was, in the Irish myths, a High King of Ireland.