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The Four Legged Green Eyed Monster

It is like this with me
Over and Over
I wonder
Why I fish
Why a fish like me is named clueless
Why do drama queens sing?
Why escape it too?
Why jealousy is green with envy?
Color it blue
Sad tones when I am without you
Every guy in the book
Got red with rage
She took his book
Read page after page
Somewhere the sin
Became qualified as a four legged green eyed monster
And somehow we forget all about what we said when we get on stage
Amber and gold reflected her eyes
Goes on without remembering
That cold blue despise

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  • Clovis...Curious silver member
    March 24, 2008

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    Superb

    Most unique indeed. I think I got the sense of this write, even though you used some very creative imagery indeed. Again, very well done.


  • g-tonttu
    January 30, 2008

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    Well...It's deep and confusing. I like the premise although I do not really follow all of it. I really enjoyd the "questioning of authority"/philosophical debate; "Why jealousy is green with envy?
    Color it blue"
    Why green indeed?

    G