A jugular vein twitches
It glistens in the moonlight
Pulsing away slowly
Crimson washes over pale skin
Pouring from mouths and eyes
Screaming for liberty
A feral sneer rumbles
Already dead he kicks the body
A neck's snap echoes
Seeing life pass from eyes
His prerogative lies here
For he is stained in the blood of all
Author notes
well this was weird
A contest entry
- Make Me Shiver by IFeedFromHisKiss.
942 points, ended January 31, 2008, 16 entries
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*cowers in corner mumbling"Edward will save me, Edward will save me" over and over* hmmmmmmmmmm yes that did make me shiver, and diffinitly not in a good way. hope that's what you were going for!
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muchahahahahahaa
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Literally this made me nacious
AMAZING!
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of couressee!
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o i really like this one great job
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thanks!
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