Dearest darling, sweetheart mine,
will you be my valentine?
Your deep dark eyes..
my, how they shine!
More than mere mortal,
you must be divine!
I'm lonesome, love-sick,
feeling so blue.
My every thought
is only of you!
There's a cure
I'm longing for..
a kiss from lips
which I adore.
You're all I want,
all that I need.
I grew to love you,
you planted the seed.
Like morning glory,
a clinging vine
I'm stuck on you..
you're my sunshine.
You light up my life
with love so true
my heartlight beams,
dear, only for you.
I have no doubt,
it's with you I belong.
You speak, I hear music..
a beautiful song.
A song that only
an angel could hear
for I'm in heaven
whenever you're near.
Your face, your smile,
the sound of your laughter
make me believe in
'happily ever after'.
Maureen Halasovski - January 29, 2008
Author notes
You don't believe in 'happily ever after'? How unromantic can you be?
I rewrote this poem so it's almost like new!
All it needs is a comment from YOU!
P.S.: I hope you like the video, too!
(The music is "My Valentine" by Martina McBride..my current favorite song.)
Poem was originally written November 16th, 2003, for a "sappy" love poem contest.
Be Happy! Get Sappy!
A contest entry
- Contest #28 FOR HUGH WYLES FAVORITES ONLY! by huguenauties.
3500 points, ended February 16, 2008, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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this is a great pome i like this keep it up
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A poem that dreams are made of.
Not in this lifetime for me, anyway, but it would be nice.
Terry -
wow
yeah i beleive in happily ever after.. lol
wow.. why my man can't be romantic like this.. very nice, especially : a song that only an angel could hear for i am in heaven whenever you're near..
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I don't know what I believe, sometimes I do, sometimes I don't. I mean, the "Happily ever after" thing.
I know it would be great to get a poem like this, slapped in my palm or sent in a valentine...or wrapped around a bottle of Moxie...now that would indeed be romantic!
Good luck in the contest...if you win, make it a funny topic...I've never won more than a bronze trophy in a Huguenauties' contest...one of these days...one of these darned days!
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Now I know what I'm looking for in finding my true love! There's nothing sappy about love, when your heart is on the line! I just made a list of what I want in a man. I stashed it in a drawer. Let's see what will happen. Best wishes in this contest!
Shana
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Dear Maureen,
A beautiful expression of lasting love which, though it does not erase the memories of former loves, understands and accepts them without remorse or regret, transcending them all in the knowledge that while the human heart is capable of loving many, one love alone will become paramount.
Best of luck in the voting.
Applause, love and hugs, Hugh (R.)
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Hi Maureen, I love your poem very much and I love sappy love poems especially if they're to Heath. It's great the way you've added the music.
Love Hine.
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Dear Maureen, What a beautiful poem and song.
Valentines day brings out the romantic side of us, and isn't it wonderful?
Love Jen.
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excellent~
Beautiful sis
And I love the song to
Thanks for sending me the link
I looked last night to no avail
Best of luck in the contest..this is a winner in my book
Hugs n love
Your sis
Susan~~~
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this is amazing. u write so well ///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////beautiful.
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Thank you!
HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY!
<3 Maureen
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Dear Maureen,
Awwwww Maureen this is a very lovely Valentine greeting, your words show so much love for the special person in your life. Beautifully written my dear Soul/Sister.
Love Joan
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Thank you, Joan!
HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY!
Love,
Maureen
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Very sweet!
Your couplets are great, Maureen, with such comfort and confidence in your love. "Happily ever after" is quite possible once we understand what happiness is.
Best of luck in the contest, and happy Valentine's Day.
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Thank you, Margaret!
HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY!
<3 Maureen
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