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Through the rainbow

The heavy rain stopped
through the window I looked
the sun shined as I knew
after the rain it always do
I rode the rainbow
it took me to a magical garden
with the colours of the rainbow
it mixed
full of magic
in its lake I swimmed
of this garden I had dreamed
but now its true
and I always knew
I refused to go back with the rainbow
in that garden I stayed
did not realize such beauty
could only be in a dream
I woke up
and the sun was there
and so was the rainbow
wonder if it was waiting for me
guess I'll never know
I just remember the magical garden
every time there's a rainbow
that I could look through

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  • jasminerose
    January 30, 2008

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    A beautiful dream of a magical garden to remember! Very lovely imagery that reveals all the enchantment that this dream holds!
    Thank you for entering such a beautiful poem in my contest!
    Jasminerose


  • creationsfromheart
    January 30, 2008
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    awwwww nice, love the rideing of the rainbow


  • lake of dremas
    January 29, 2008
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    nice dream