Be careful
__________what you pray for,
be careful__________________ what you do.
In life —so short —there is no time
to waste
for me,
for you.
Be careful what you pray for,
be careful
what you do.
A contest entry
- The best of the best. by yourbentangel.
689 points, ended February 9, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What is the question? Why? Or why not?
Comments
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short and sweet, great rhyming, great rhythm. And I like the spaces in between too!
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Awesome.
Short. Yet, the point is very clear! I love this. I printed it out and cut it out and pasted it to my computer.
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I am not sure that I understand the format of this. I like the message it sends, but it just seems unfinished, like you have more to say. Thank you so much for entering and good luck in the contest!
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You're right, maybe it was unfinished
I have a time management situation. Not an excuse, I know. But for now, that is all I have to say about that. Sorry.
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