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Wednesday's Sonnet

No silence could intern admiration
Of mosaics gazed of deep inflection
Smoothed of tender love's orientation

This heart casts freely to her direction

For lace unstained by experience cruel
Remains in spotless portions of my soul
Long held in reserve for her precious jewel
As she exists written on my heart's scroll

In traceable letters I could not hide
Her beauty thrives in perfections divine
For which I would surely cast all aside
And toward her beauty ever resign

Every drop of this human existence
To consummate complete coexistence

 


  

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  • Never Fall in Love
    April 2, 2008
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    w00t!!!
    SPotlight
    beautiful position for a uber beautiful poem

    Never ♥


  • Tattboyspet
    April 2, 2008

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    how come I haven't seen this one before????
    Thank heaven's it was in the spotlight!
    nicely done here ... but please tell me that you were not talking about Wednesday as in the day of the week?!
    lol!
    second stanza was definitely my favourite


  • ml12
    April 1, 2008

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    Great write! You portray the emotions in a unique way and I am very impressed with your ability to rhyme.


  • Poetic Black
    April 1, 2008

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    Love in the time of CHOLERA

    Sorry for that but its' just my luck with love.

    I particularly enjoy the second stanza you have a vivid understanding of Sonnets and your technique is unmistakable.

    As for me me I'm still in the Cholera. . . for now
    C'est la vie!


  • Gibson
    April 1, 2008

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    I have to say that this is an extremely well written poem. Your wording really made me feel the emotions pouring throughout the poem. If only we all got a chance to feel this strongly about a person, and have them feel the same way towards us as well.


  • tearyeyedbutterfly
    March 13, 2008
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    Wow! It's beautiful!


  • JustSimplyLissa gold member
    March 3, 2008
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    Beautifully written with equisite elegance. Very graceful and tasteful. Wonderfully done!


  • z etoile
    February 18, 2008
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    Wow this is just breathtaking! It is penned so well keep up the good work


  • Stardust-luvr
    February 10, 2008

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    awesome my very dear brother your words for Wendy are treasured perfection - priceless for such a wonderful lady. love ya both xoxooxxoxox


  • CaliOkie silver member
    February 5, 2008

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    Great

    This is a beautiful sonnet and so appropriate to the subject. You strike a perfect balance between form and content and you manage to make the poem sweet without it being gushing.

    And yes, there is perfection about her.

    CaliOkie


  • PerfectImperfection
    February 3, 2008
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    This is absolutely beautiful Mark!!! Your poems are always filled with such intensity, and this is no exception. A truly lovely sonnet you have penned here. Thank you so much for hosting the contest in my honor, and for penning something for it as well. It means so much!


  • Naridill
    January 31, 2008

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    Since when do you call Wendy - Wednesday


  • poet2angels gold member
    January 30, 2008

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    Great...
    Write something so beautiful that it blows everything else out of the water

    I shall return with something for my sweet Sis

    Lynda


  • creationsfromheart
    January 30, 2008

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    breath taking

    this is breathtaking, it is a remarkable write and shows so much love of a man pourinjg out his own heart it over flows, a beautiful write.


  • BeautifulFlame
    January 30, 2008

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    This pretty much says it all...wow Mark a touching heart spiiled out in pretty ink for a pretty woman!
    Sighing because she will love it!

    In traceable letters I could not hide
    Her beauty thrives in perfections divine
    For which I would surely cast all aside
    And toward her beauty ever resign


    Beautiful poetry and love just goes together huh?
    Huggles
    ~Lisa~


  • Exodus gold member
    January 29, 2008

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    You have part of your soul still clean?!
    Doing better than me
    But in all seriousness, this was beautiful hun
    The end is really lovely, reminds me of how life should be
    I'm sure she loved it


  • lilAj
    January 29, 2008
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    Woah

    I have nothing else to say


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    January 29, 2008

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    wow this is such a beautifulwrite bro and it holds alot of truth and beauty in your words. a beautiful dedication to someone amazing

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