I promise to love you until time ends
To love you as lover,consort and friend
To respect and cherish you
To always listen
To love you no matter what you do
and when you're gone
I will always say "I miss him"
I promise to compromise,
to always work things out
to always look into your eyes
and remember what we're about
To respect your independence
to one day raise a family
to take turns with being dependent
to always fight for you and me
I promise, my love,
to always be there by your side
from the moments you wake
until the moment you die
to take the time to share in our dreams
to go beyond fine and be better than I seem
to always try for you to be my strongest
to always make things better when bad days
are the longest
I promise,my beloved
to never forget your memory
I promise all this and more
beyond eternity.
Author notes
You are exactly my brand of heroine :]
A contest entry
- Wedding Vows. by Expression.
525 points, ended February 14, 2008, 15 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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awww ok i can see ur gonna be a finalist...made me almost get a tear...anyway very beautiful(aint ya gladi toldu to enter).
good job and thanks for entering
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tehe!!!! yay! =]
lol, it came from my heart ^_^
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EXCELLENT
These words are beautiful, I love this piece. Good luck to you. -
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thank you :]
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These are some sweet vows to share with your loved one. The one you plan to share you life with. I enjoyed it very much. I hope you do well in the contest.
Kelli
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thank you! :]
yeah I dont know, the contest just sparked my creativity and love and I was able to successfully write this the way I wished! :]
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I remember when I got married. It was almost one year ago. I hadn't really prepared my vows like I should have, they were so lame... and then my husband (Who I had no idea could even write) BLEW ME OUT OF THE WATER! It was so embarrassing.
But I loved it. There are just gorgeous. You did a fine job expressing your love. Good luck in the cotnest
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Hahaha, Aww!! Congrats to you both. Well um, are you still married?
yeah--our loves tend to suprise us when we least expect it. They're good at that >>"
tehe. Thank you very much I appreciate your comment.
Lols.
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yeah, for some reason I'm really happy, I have no clue why. I'm telling you they put sugar in the air and I'm breathing it in and its making me happy!! o.0
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