There is so much to say and so little time to say it in.
There are so few words to express the way that I feel for you.
Yeah there is a whole lifetime of words to learn,
a book full of verbs and nouns.
But there really is no way that I could put
into words what my heart is telling me.
I don’t know if you should know.
If I tell you would you run?
I can’t just keep it all inside.
Make myself believe that is does not matter.
You have a power over me that you do not even know you have.
My love started even before it could begin.
I am forever yours,
even though you were never mine.
Author notes
I found this in my notes. I thought it simple but very deep and loving. There is no date or who it's too but I think I have a idea, not sure.
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A contest entry
- Anything Goes by karmacae.
700 points, ended February 14, 2008, 67 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I know this feeling all too well, as I think most of us have...Thank you and good luk in the contest, Crystalgodess
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yes very simple...but your words are so sincere that the only emotion I feel is the sweetness in loving someone who could 'never be mine'... this is such a captivating piece!!!
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it is deep and loving
and oh how
the soft blue of the background
almost fades into the intimacy of the words
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seldom are spoken words of any real consequence. It is the way the words are acted upon
Joe
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I now hear and wait and watch.
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just don't hide!!!
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Beautiful yet sad at the same time... I wish I could have said something like that to my ex... i miss her *sigh* Great work hun. xx
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My love started even before it could begin.
I am forever yours,
even though you were never mine.
Wonderful words and such a horrible thing to have happen ya know, to love someone so much but for them to not want you or even know how much you care for them...
good luck in the contest!
-brittany-
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Thank you very much.
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I like this very much, really enjoyed the read. In your last line, did you mean though and not thought? Still, a good write.
Kelli
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Yes I did, thank you for pointing that out
Oh and thank you for the comment.
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