In my dreams
I walk with you
down a path
of primrose,
holding hands,
looking into each other’s eyes,
occasionally stopping for a sweet kiss.
In my dreams
you look at me
and see a young man,
wonderful,
handsome,
vibrant,
healthy,
and
much in love
with you.
But, sadly,
they are but
just dreams
they are not real.
In reality,
Though much in love
with you,
I am not
the one you see
In my dreams.
A contest entry
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BEAUTIFUL
THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL RICHARD. SORRY I MISSED IT. LUV IS SUCH SWEET SORROW OH! BUT THE MEMORIES WILL STAY WITH US FOREVER. THX FOR SHARING MY DEAR FRIEND.
LINDA
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Oh My Word!!
Powerful piece You have penned my Friend and I am sorry I missed this one
I was having Internet hiccups and finally getting online more to read and inhale pieces
This tugs hard at the Heartstrings and I wish You only Happiness~This brings forth tears
You are near and dear to me Richard and I'm blessed to have You in my life for I learn so much from You
You inspire all who cross Your path~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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This is touchingly beautiful and humblingly true of each of our personal images we see of our selves. Yet not reality in the heart and eyes of one who loves us.
And assuming what others see in us, isn't always right either.I am so pleased to see you here again Richard. Missed you bunches! Will be watching for more of your poetic thoughts in verse.LOL~Suseann P.S. I like the form this piece is scribed in also.A smooth flowing and heart felt offering.
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