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She...

She will pull you down and beat you up
Make you scream and lose religion
She is the answer to your prayers that God never heard

Making you cry and making you wail
She taunts your heart and steals your wallet
Takes all your time until nothings left

No more right from wrong
Not even knowing there is a line

What once was good is now corrupt
She stole your money and ripped your heart
You know not how to get back no even how to start

You lost your savior because of a silly game
You traded it all and lost in the end
She doesn't care she never did

She is gone and you are left
Nothing but you and prayer again

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  • Angel Full Of Hurt
    February 6, 2008

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    she sounds like Lady of Pain

    lol a game i played ...the lady name is Lady Of Pain lol..she gives u excruciating pain when you did much wrong lol very good poem..painfully strong though ..keep writing you..never stop...this poem exploded right in front of my face.


  • Pureisolation
    February 1, 2008
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    very nice poem hoewever, whats going on???


    • Love-Lee
      February 6, 2008
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      Lol!

      I wrote it for a contest guess it was deleted from it or something I am fine... Lol!


    • Pureisolation
      February 1, 2008
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      I mean whats going on in your life to write something like this??? iam only courious as to whats going on.