Out of air
Hes holding me down
Is there any chance?
I hope...
A contest entry
- One More Quickie; 13 words, 13 minutes, 10 poets by Exodus.
300 points, ended January 29, 2008, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Well this is certainly different than the poem you put in as a reservation. The end leaves you feeling kind of breathless and sad. Beautiful work, thank you
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Thank you, i appreciate your kind words.
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Umm...
1. you're not supposed to write until I put up the prompt,
and 2. this is 14 words.
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i know, im just waiting, this is what i put for a reservation
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