Dry your eyes and loose your tear's.
Stand up proud and face your peers.
Say to your self whatever life
throws in my way I can handle it.
Breath in and out and smile.
Laughter will set you free
give you a pleasant victory.
Laughter makes life wonderful.
Laughter releases tension.
Lughter balances your soul.
Laughter is contagious.
Laughter will brighten up your world.
Author notes
Snips of wisdom.
A contest entry
- I Need Some Uplifting Poems by February Moon.
2000 points, ended February 14, 2008, 13 entries
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Comments
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I totally agree and the rhythm if this piece is quite positive and catchy. Tears cleanse, but laughter heals. Well done.
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Good medicine this laughter without it your insides rust. Good write. Happy trails
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This is sweet and it made me smile thank you for taking the time to enter my contest best wishes and much love always
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this is a bit trite to me... laughter is way overrepeated in my opinion. Also, the rhyme scheme and language seems a bit trite and isn't really consistant. There seems to be no meter or structure here. I don't think a poem always needs these things but here it is like half rhyme scheme/half free verse. It kind of took me away from the content. This is just my opinion and you may chose to ditch it, but I honestly feel like this needs some work. Possibly some nice fresh metaphors?
Warmly,
Amy -
Truth at its' finest.
It's a very freeing message you send, and has a happy, positive note that I liked.
Good job, and well written. We all need to have laughter in our lives, otherwise it would be very dull.
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The idea in this is great. I expected more rhyme though because of the first two lines...Just an idea but I think it would be better if it was consistant
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so true!
what an encouraging piece! -
this poem is very true. laughter is the cureall.
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Aw, this made me smile so much.
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