Shallowed corpses
brush awareness
as breath from dimmed stars
echoed of caution
implodes
A contest entry
- One More Quickie; 13 words, 13 minutes, 10 poets by Exodus.
300 points, ended January 29, 2008, 6 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Remarkable image...remarkable response. It captures the detail of the prompt-image but at the same time expands into a kind of cosmic space. Worth reading and pondering.
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wow bro this is awsome and i love the way you brought that picture with so much life. well done and best of luck
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ha ha I meant beast
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Beautiful, hehe, nah, rather impressive again, far better than my pile of
, can't do this dark stuff really,
well done and good luck to you,
regards,
Floorboards.
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I'm sure you could. The best resides in us all. lol
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I'm over tired and this amazes me.
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Very nice take on the prompt, best of luck in the contest.
Bravo
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Such a visual piece in potency. Original take on the image prompt! Great write!
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And best of luck to you!
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