I will never pass this way again,
this moment in time will soon be gone.
We shall meet again, I know not when,
goodbye to midnight, hello dawn.
Farewell to this dark and lonely night,
yes a new day is about to break.
Soon this moment will be out of sight,
leaving behind the night's heartache.
Waiting for the new day to arrive,
as each moment keeps ticking away.
Oh how your love made me come alive,
now alone I must face each new day.
To cherish moments we once shared,
wonderful times that are now bygone,
We tempted fate because we dared,
to love when we were lost and alone.
Without you time has moved so slow,
each minute seems like an eternity.
Another day to try and let love go,
a moment in time that shall never be.
Author notes
Always and Forever
In a list
A contest entry
- EMOTION SECRETS by R S Adams Jr.
1100 points, ended February 19, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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sad
'a moment in time that shall never be'...unfortunately. Your poem develops through rhyme into a meanigful array of feelings.
You have expressed this sad love so well with your words.
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Sandy, another great poem by you. I understand these words very much as you know. We often write from personal experienceso, although the poem is good, I empathaize with you and these words. Jeff
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Hello Jeff. Thank you for reading and leaving this lovely comment my friend. Take care, Sandy
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Nicely done. Lovely movement, from night to morning welcoming memories of a lost love. Hoping to rekindle moments that were shared but knowing it will never the same again.
Good luck
chiefmac
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Your comment was very nice. Thank you for reading. I always enjoy you stoppping by. Take care, Sandy
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this is a poem i can truely relate too
good words and great images
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Thank you for the lovely comment on my poem.
It is most appreciated. You take care, Sandy
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Very well done. Moments like this in life should be remembered. Great poem.
Keep writing and good luck in the contest!
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A lovely comment that is most appreciated. Take care, Sandy
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pre-judge edit
May I suggest 'no' = 'know.' You may like to edit before the judging. -
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Thanks for stopping by and the suggestion. Take care.
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this a write which flows beautifully across the page with so many cherished emotions in your words. well done grammy
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A lovely comment you have penned. Thank you, it is so appreciated. Take care, Grammy
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sweet flowing words to capture moments of truth. amazing time goes slow, then other times, it flies. those cherished moments are precious to keep and remember. success in this contest.
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Hello Jules, It is wonderful to have you stop by7. Your comment was lovely and so appreciated. You take care dear friend. Always, Sandy
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