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I'm Sorry

  I can't save you
  I'm too weak
  Come back!
You left to distroy your life
And I couldn't Stop you
    I'm Sorry

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  • Beauty Of Silence
    June 20, 2008

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    wowe!

    this was sort, and very impactful... your words hit hard! amazing job heere! keep writing!

    awesome!


  • XLadyXVengeanceX
    June 13, 2008
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    short poem i like how you put feeling in to so small a write keep it up


  • Akari
    January 30, 2008

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    says so much in so few words. but don't ever say your weak cuz your not. every one has their own strengths and weaknesses. keep going.