The force I feel inside me, the pressure is building.
I wanna rage but nothing is to be told.
Behind my eyes, the veins singing with fire, boiling my blood.
It is so damn hard, I can not take the pain anymore.
What am I going to do? Where am I going to turn?
The guilt I feel, have to sell the ring but do not want to.
Have to make something, will not fail, not in my nature, will never fail.
Pick myself up off the ground everytime.
How many times will it be before I will not get up?
I am numb right now, stone faced, unable to think straight.
Lungs fill with everlasting menthol smoke, only thing to keep my sanity.
Dark circles under my eyes, pale skin, look of death, I hate it.
Will not give me a chance. They can go to hell.
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i like this alot & thank u for the comment & i know my grammar is terrible but slowly im working on it but this really is very powerful & i love the ending
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ty for your comment...yes my grammar is my BIGGEST weakness when it comes to my writing I read and reread and reread one last time but ALWAYS something some error escapes me.
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oh wow I loved it...made me feel exactly what you were feeling.there is a lot of times when I myself feel this frustrated, but just don't have the will power to give up...I won't ever give up.
::huggs&kisses::
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Thank you for your comment, yeah I feel sometimes that I will never get what I want in life but I will never fail or give up on anything. I appreciate your feedback and if you need any help with grammar I am okay at it. I am not the best lol.
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