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[ I feel the relief from the solid gold torture. ]

I feel the relief from the solid gold torture.

              (Pain) 

Life, lie, fly, die. Salvation comes from within.

My friend this is it, come with me

you see without creation.

 

Let them go, your demons are slain,

Your pain is forever more, immortality.

Look up, do you see? your staring back at me.

I torture myself bit by bit, you will be free from this artificial heaven.

 

Lies you feed me, truth I hear.

Your words are nothing but apathetic meanings.

I lost myself so long ago, this reoccurring shame

Wearing sheets of white satin and deceit.

We walk alone down the empty path,full of light and lies.

Just one more time, I need you, I pray for this.

Insanity, its what makes me tick.

Its not enough, I want to see the light,

take me there again, one last time, one last time.

Floating away I see myself, only I am to late, crashing again.

Its over, as I set up for another.

 

Save me now, take me from temptation, and scarlet desire.

The clouds begin to clear, and I see myself standing here

A junkie.

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Option 5)song and alex needs a life, its like a battle with myself over drug addictions. And forgivness from god and myself.

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  • tokiohotel
    May 21, 2008

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    i love this. I can feel your pain and the emotion you put into this. Im glad the random button picked this. Good write.


  • GuardianPhoenix7289
    February 25, 2008
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    Intriguing....

    Not quite the "long, epic" length I was looking for, but it was still a good write, so I will still definitely put this poem into consideration! I could feel your pain and wishing for redemption and forgiveness! Very very good job! I was quite impressed! Good luck!!!


  • Sf
    February 6, 2008
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    Keep fighting it...


  • glamour guts
    January 31, 2008

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    Deep and heart felt,i really liked it,alot of people seem like they are afraid to step into that hyper emotional writing thing,you obviously arent,and its a great poem.=)

  • X-Xenon
    January 30, 2008
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    Wauw! I love this (:

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