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Red and White

Dressed in the colours of Santa
But gift enough for each other
What better hope for the human race
Than a beautiful girl and her lover

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  • parachute fog
    February 7, 2008
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    talk about creating hope

  • wendymolly
    February 6, 2008

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    This is endearment candy!

    These thoughts are truly what can make the Heart stop!
    An easier kind of air ...palpable. And to breathe in!!
    Great Metaphor from an equally great inner spirit.

    ~~pithyAplomb.

  • Eusebius
    February 1, 2008

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    bravo

    for all its brevity perhaps the most romantic poem I've read in a very long time, indeed! I just plain loved it! bravo.... bravo... bravo...


  • pinkhawk
    January 30, 2008
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    ...I think it simply amazing!