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So Tired

I have searched forever just to find you
so lonely and desolate, I'd never make it through
but then I found you, the one I was waiting for
and I picked up my loneliness, kicked it right out the door.

But now I'm so tired, still waiting for you
you're the one that I need, god help me what can I do
you keep me dangling, like a puppet on a string
back and forth I sway like a child on a swing.

I know it's your life and it's all up to you
just please tell me now what you want me to do
I'm feeling so lonely, life's bleeding me dry
please give me a sign, for you anything I will try.

But now I'm so tired, still waiting for you
you're the one that I need, god help me what can I do
you keep me dangling, like a puppet on a string
back and forth I sway like a child on a swing.

Oh what can I do, please tell me what can I do
I'm oh so tired now waiting for you
eternally I seem
to be waiting for you.

Author notes

Tired Of Waiting - Green Day
from the album "Shenanigans" (2002)

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  • Peter Greenslade gold member
    January 29
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    you seem to seeking so much lately..love seems to be eluding you ,, but you seek beautifully xx


  • YoursTrulyJulie silver member
    January 29

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    Well penned !

    I think you have done a great job with this one Well done and best of luck in this contest


  • KorinaAngell
    January 29

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    Awesome

    I love your poem! I haven't ever listened to the song, so now I have to hear it. (My friend is a big Green Day fan, so that shouldn't be a problem!)
    Best of luck to you in the contest!

  • x-Black-Butterfly-x silver member
    January 29

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    oh this is such a powerful write and take on the song i loved the way you wrote this with such emotion and depth well done gran


  • Poetry-and-rhyme
    January 29

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    oh so nicee this is so sweet written great use of the song
    Oh what can I do, please tell me what can I do
    I'm oh so tired now waiting for you
    eternally I seem
    to be waiting for you.

    i love it a lots
    good lucks in the contest
    Bedig

  • nothinghere silver member
    January 29

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    I like this a lot, sometimes we feel that way... You write a good lyric hun, goodluck in the contest

    Karen

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