I slept by your side
Flesh on flesh
Arms and legs twined
We slept as one
You never let me go
Never rolled away
You held me all night
Together in that moment
You held me and I hung on
I felt secure and safe
While we slept, were we truly one
A contest entry
- ARGH!!!! My Muse has gone AWOL... by Luckintheshadows.
450 points, ended August 2, 2008, 31 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Be honest and tell me what you think.
Comments
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Very sweet poem, makes you feel all mushy when you are in love, and long when you are not. Great write, thank you for entering the contest. Good luck.
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whisper
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oh, I love the romance of this, the air of sweet togetherness and comfort. I really, REALLY like this, thanks for sharing, and taking the time to enter my contest,
Luck. -
Beautiful
This piece shows a tremendous amount of tenderness and vulnerability. It's very raw, very honest, very real. I like this one alot. Good write. ---'--`{@
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damn
says alot.
in few amazing words.
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