Give 'em an inch;
_________________they'll take a mile.
Give 'em a metre;
_________________ they'll cry,
_____________________________ask why
"are you charging me
for being lazy or criminal?"
They don't know metrick
here
yet.
Oh, I think you KNOW
of whom
I am talking
or posting,
you know.
No, no, no!
Not all
of
You!
just those mean
&
lazy few.
I once had my own company.
Then
I got bored
& gave it away
to other, more cooperative
members.
Next time
I go in
prepared.
& I think it will serve
both coffees,
teas,
as well as
juices.
Juices?
Maybe even booze.
Or not?
Why not?
You
tell
me
why
or
why not.
O.K.?
Thanks.
thanks,
gracias,
&
merci.
Author notes
This is a work in progress, thanks. Please have some patience, or give me a break.
I'll be glad to return the favour.
What is the question? Why? Or why not?
Comments
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I don't like the flow - it seems awkward and I feel the style is not very smooth. I do like some phrasing but I don't feel the dirt in ears.
Thanks for entering,
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this is a good write. Keep up the good work.
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