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Damein Part 1

Chapter one

Damein is a half demon.

He was the son of Drake & Melony.
And his name was Damien,
his mom was a human,but
the father was a demon.

ONE night while Damien was at his,
Girl friends house to ask her to marry him.
all of a sudden he had a strange feeling that,
came over him one that witch he has never felt before.
Tonya he said some thing's wrong,it's like i can feel
someone dieing.

Mean while in the den Tonya's father Jo was sitting
reading his paper when the phone rang he said hello.
The voice on the other in said this is Susan.
Hi Susan what's up Jo said? just wanted to call,
to see how this are doing.
just then Tonya hollered for her father he told Susan he'll
be right back.

He came to the front room where Tonya and Damien was.
Jo asked Damien what was going on.Damien started Talking
telling about how felt. Jo Told Tonya to tell
Susan he'll have to call her back. cause something
has came up.

Tonya went to the den and picked up the phone
and told Susan that my father would have to call,
her back cause something came up.
Susan said Tonya please hold oh i herd ,
screaming coming from tracks place,
and i am going to check it out.
Tonya said OK I'll wait.

Susan came back real fast like,
Tonya tell Damien he needs to get home as
fast is he can.something has happened at his house.

Tonya hung up the phone ran to there living room.
Where Damien and Jo was.
Damien Susan said you need to come home as soon
as you can she fears that something has happened
cause she herd Melony screaming.

Damien then said mom never screams she and dad never
get in a fight.
So he new something was wrong.

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  • daisybee
    February 6, 2008

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    keep writing out, what I presume is your story, spill it on the page, and I hope it heals, or at least eases your heart to get it out.