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after he gets back home from office




I count infinite seconds
awaiting you
between tired lashes of my cold eyes
with a dream of you and me
together
holding the present forever
until the darkness blows a lullaby
for a while





and then my heart wakes up
with a smile that whispers your name
as soon as I see you back home tonight


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  • Matthew-Parry
    February 7, 2008

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    A Very Good Poem! Your word usuage and structure of this write allows the reader (me) to flow effortlessly aloft in your words and thoughts! Thank you for this escape!

    Keep Up The Great Work!!!

    Matthew


  • Puppydog gold member
    January 29, 2008
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    SO SWEET!!!!

    It is lovely how one sits and lets their dreams of their loved one get them through the day.