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The days fade away,
My handwriting looks more,
and more like yours.

Though I forget what your face looks like,
And the sound of your voice.
I still recognise the impression you left,
for me to carry around.

For +313 on going days I have felt this
Repression.

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LanceDanger
February 4, 2008
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Cool =D
It's shaping up great, the finished version should be even better =3 Great work! =D
LeVenin
January 30, 2008

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simple, yet amazing
i love how simple the poem is, yet how deep it is if you really think about it. it's great.
- Holley-Anne
  January 30, 2008
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  Thanks heaps, darl!!
Turning-To-Dust
January 29, 2008
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I really love this poem. So simple, so deep.
x
- Holley-Anne
  January 30, 2008
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  Thankyou!!
  xxx