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Cold Front

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The wind is howling

its lone wolf song

 

and the cold is running

through the hollers

with dagger-tongued screeches

that slash through the night

and rip open the throat

of the warm yellow dog

 

I hear it coming

 

rattling the windows

with a white fanged mockery

killing yesterday’s spring-fed promises

in the ice of its midwinter madness

 

Oh, and it’s so cold

 

ravishing the neck

with needle sharp kisses

that cut to the bone

and sever the head

of golden-haired dreams

 

while I try to find one coal

left alive in the stove

 

 

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Image: http://ladynightseduction.deviantart.com/art/Moonlight-Howl-21831520

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  • grass
    February 6, 2008
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    This is so lonely and I love the phrase "wolf song".


  • Axelle Black
    January 29, 2008
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    This is really good. I love the second half of the second stanza. As well as the one about the rattling windows. And the beforelast stanza. And those final words. Amazing ending. And I really also adore your brilliant use of vocabulary. All good, as usual. :